Pencil sketch- Thief Person-Thingy

Here's a sketch I made . It took three days to make and I spent five+ hours on it.

Please give me feedback, and note that the drawing looks more grainy than in real life because the scanner sorta messed it up.

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wow, its amazing XD much better then I could do, although the buildings are a little tilted, but that is all i'm noticing that could be better!

you're right (I hate using a ruler), but the one in the back left was supposed to be like that

I see... one thing that RMD drawing tools could use is a grid

and the scanner ruined my airships, and the shading (especially on the gutter in the foreground)

Pretty good! However, you can obviously tell that it is just that, a sketch.

Do you think you could develop this into something full-fledged?

What do you mean? if you mean coloring it, then maybe, but if you mean that the shading looks messed up, the color on everything is weird, and that nothing is very well-defined, then that's just the scanner and I can't fix that.

i think it's an awesome drawing! who sez ur not good at drawing people?

only one thing that i would notice: the sword doesn't look very threatening, as opposed to, say, a two-edged blade with more of a curve. but that's being awfully picky, isn't it?

I see what you mean, but she isn't supposed to be threatening, more like wary, and ready to be attacked at any minute.

ah, okay.