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Post  BobShmob on Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:31 pm

Here's a sketch I made Very Happy . It took three days to make and I spent five+ hours on it.

Please give me feedback, and note that the drawing looks more grainy than in real life because the scanner sorta messed it up. Happy


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Post  IzNotSpontaneous on Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:44 pm

wow, its amazing XD much better then I could do, although the buildings are a little tilted, but that is all i'm noticing that could be better!
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Post  BobShmob on Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:53 pm

you're right (I hate using a ruler), but the one in the back left was supposed to be like that Happy
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Post  IzNotSpontaneous on Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:06 pm

I see... one thing that RMD drawing tools could use is a grid
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Post  BobShmob on Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:56 pm

and the scanner ruined my airships, and the shading (especially on the gutter in the foreground) Sad
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Post  eklipse13 on Mon Aug 17, 2009 4:07 pm

Pretty good! However, you can obviously tell that it is just that, a sketch.

Do you think you could develop this into something full-fledged?
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Post  BobShmob on Mon Aug 17, 2009 4:19 pm

What do you mean? if you mean coloring it, then maybe, but if you mean that the shading looks messed up, the color on everything is weird, and that nothing is very well-defined, then that's just the scanner and I can't fix that.
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Post  Insanity on Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:37 am

i think it's an awesome drawing! who sez ur not good at drawing people? Razz

only one thing that i would notice: the sword doesn't look very threatening, as opposed to, say, a two-edged blade with more of a curve. Laughing but that's being awfully picky, isn't it?
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Post  BobShmob on Tue Aug 18, 2009 5:00 pm

I see what you mean, but she isn't supposed to be threatening, more like wary, and ready to be attacked at any minute.
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Post  Insanity on Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:49 am

ah, okay.
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